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Hazel and Laughter

A bed of rose petals Hazel sprawls bed started collapsing then falls bridegroom heated with anger then looked at each in laughter she wanted pickles and ice cream balls ©5/21/2015 Contest Name: L&H Limericks Sponsor: Catie Lindsey

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/30/2015 7:11:00 PM

Clever and amusing write Eve, Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2015 6:11:00 PM

Pickles already?? hahaha. Love it, sweetie!!

Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 5:48:00 PM

:~) butter milk was mine and I hated butter milk at the time

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/22/2015 11:14:00 PM

Lol!!!!!! Excellent write, I love this great limerick.......good luck in the contest.........Afolabi.

Eve Roper
Date: 5/29/2015 5:48:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi, :~) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2015 1:43:00 AM

made me giggle Eve and the pregnancy comments made me laugh even more - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx 7

Eve Roper
Date: 5/22/2015 12:23:00 PM

If I made you giggle then I did something right. Everyone harase me because I never get the joke. I don't have a sense of humor so I do try :~)

Constance La France

Date: 5/21/2015 5:33:00 PM

Eve, this is a good one, 7, and thanks for visiting my poetry

Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2015 6:23:00 PM

thank you B.W., the visities to your home are always wonderful