Happiness

There once was a young man called Rodger Who's very transfixed with his todger From morning till night He gets his delight Now he shares his bed with his lodger 29 ~12~14

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James Fraser

Date: 1/5/2015 1:56:00 PM

Keep that naughty side teeming, and your readers eyes streaming Jan :) xx :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/5/2015 2:10:00 PM

do read the follow up - Rodger and his lodger lol:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/31/2014 9:45:00 AM

It is so nice that he has learned to share!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2014 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Richard:-) There is a follow up poem called Rodger and his lodger lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/31/2014 9:38:00 AM

Haha : )I love it sweet lady.I do thankyou for being a lovely friend who brought smiles to myface. Wishing you a great new year ahead..I ll be back to read your others next year : )

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2014 10:51:00 AM

There is a follow up poem called Rodger and his lodger lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Leon Enriquez

Date: 12/31/2014 4:23:00 AM

Dear Jan: Thank you for the support my friend. Here's wishing you and your loved ones A Happy New Year filled with peace, joy and love. All my best wishes on the last day of 2014, Leon.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/31/2014 6:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Leon:-) Hugs Jan best wishes for 2015:-) xx

Sandip Goswami

Date: 12/30/2014 2:00:00 PM

Very interesting dear. I enjoyed your magic with smile. Best wishes to you.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 2:04:00 PM

there is a second part to this one sandip called Rodger and the lodger:-) hugs jan xxx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/30/2014 1:01:00 PM

smiling beautifully painted jan wishing you a happy new year dear pal

Jan Allison
Date: 12/30/2014 1:06:00 PM

there is a follow up called Rodger and his lodger Liam lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 12/29/2014 7:24:00 PM

Oh dear....God one, Jan. Love the comments back and forth and up and down.....oh dear....hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 7:32:00 PM

never heard of a shift stick must write one fro Brenda now lol have written a follow up called rodger and his lodger lol hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/29/2014 7:05:00 PM

funny funny, we need laughter~!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 7:10:00 PM

Oh I so need it at the moment Cas - have done a follow up called Rodger and his lodger:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2014 3:17:00 PM

hmmm, was his lodger his todger? so who was he sharing his bed with before that? hahaha. good one, my silly friend!!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 6:33:00 PM

I have re posted it with a second verse lol:-) Hugs jan x

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 3:32:00 PM

just a silly write I needed humour tonight:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/29/2014 2:44:00 PM

Love it! A Fav.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 2:50:00 PM

Had a rough few days just needed a giggle not tears:-) hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/29/2014 2:43:00 PM

I found this one a little offensive. I can't really explain why, I just just do. Signed Rodger!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 6:34:00 PM

have reposted it Armand with a second verse:-) hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 2:49:00 PM

LOl Thanks my friend - I thought Armand was your real name guess Rodger is your middle one lol :-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/29/2014 2:32:00 PM

Delightful, dear Jan! A good lesson! Beautiful Limerick!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios I figured maybe todger isn't a well known word apart from in the UK lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/29/2014 2:15:00 PM

Maybe you could write me a poem about a stick shift.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 2:17:00 PM

LOL I could possibly rise to the occasion to do it Brenda LOL:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/29/2014 2:14:00 PM

It took me a few minutes to find out what a todger is. I must say I know it better as a stick shift. I bet you he doesn't go anywhere without it. :-).

Jan Allison
Date: 12/29/2014 2:17:00 PM

ha ha ha a shift stick I like it! I bet he's a bit attached to it lol! Hugs jan xxx