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Halloween From Dusk Till Dawn

From dusk till dawn its like monster con little witches riding on brooms dating couples as brides and grooms they knock on your door expecting a treat chocolate , butter finger or anything sweet teenage kids , they tp street they run at the first sight of heat werewolves , vampires , goblins and ghouls the ones who stay at home are truly the fools The day where candy is free and abound laughing children are the only sound haunted houses , darkness and scary while some little girls choose to dress like a fairy the sky is the limit , you can be whoever you dream Frankenstein, Dracula, the wolf man and scream too much , candy and hyper kids beer , soda and other liquids but after dawn all is asleep no screaming no laughter , not even a peep

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Date: 10/24/2011 2:33:00 PM
very good imagery and rhymes in this poem. it's not a limerick - probably just rhyme, same w/the one you entered in my contest. you should probably reclassify them. anyway, welcome to the soup! if this poem is for a contest, goodl luck!
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Black Eyed Susan
Date: 10/27/2011 9:56:00 AM
I wouldn't have known you were ESL by reading this poem or the one in my contest. you sound american to me :)
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Mostafa Zaki
Date: 10/24/2011 2:42:00 PM
Thank you for the comments,as i said before English is my second language so i'm not so good with it yet, i'm still in the learning process

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