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Halloween Conquest

When I saw them coming I knew what to do Straightened out the white sheets and pulled my mask down, too. When the doorbell rang I yanked it wide Three sets of eyeballs stood there white eyed~ They didn't expect my ghostly "BOO"! "Trick or Treat" one finally professed My staring gaze...they thought me possessed. I grabbed a handful of candy for each And with an alabaster hand stretched out my reach~ I thought, "Another Halloween Conquest"!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations Dan on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:22:00 AM
Many congrats on your fine win in the contest Daniel >> James
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Date: 11/25/2010 11:53:00 AM
love this one Daniel, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:49:00 AM
Hehe Dan you made me giggle with this one.. Congratulations on your win ;-) Wilma x
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:57:00 AM
hahaha many congrats Daniel for this victory.
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:50:00 AM
nice reverse scare, Daniel. Who said they should have all the fun...congrats to you!
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Date: 11/25/2010 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:12:00 PM
Daniel....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 8:23:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:03:00 PM
:) I'm trying to imagine you doing this, Daniel. Very funny! Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/24/2010 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Daniel
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:23:00 PM
sounds like you outGHOULED them. Congrats on your win with this interesting limerick, Daniel. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/24/2010 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your worthy poem's place, and have a happy thanksgiving. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/3/2010 11:05:00 AM
Thank you for posting your poetry that we may all enjoy it here at PoetrySoup Dan. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2010 10:08:00 AM
Yup it's fun seeing their tiny faces & bug eyes and hearing them squeal with laughter! Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:10:00 AM
Very humorous and witty write on Halloween Conquest, Daniel
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:26:00 AM
descriptive and ful of wit.. a delicious treat! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:34:00 PM
Oh, how I love this poem, Daniel! I would have been right beside you dressed up as a witch with a green face. I actually scared kids away before they took the candy! We think alike on "trick" or treat! Best wishes in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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