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Halftime

Clyde Stanson sought to repair clocks he labored in school of hard knocks. Getting them to tick was a simple trick. But they wouldn't produce any tocks.

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Daniel Turner

Date: 8/16/2016 8:37:00 AM

As if time doesn't pass fast enough already. Nice limerick, Paul. You made me think and smile. Thanks.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/16/2016 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel, for your entertaining and kind comment. It's thoughtful of you to stop by.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 5:50:00 AM

This is BRILLIANT Paul - so clever and amusing:-) hugs Jan xx7

Jan Allison
Date: 8/16/2016 5:51:00 PM

The solution is simple then Paul - you must never leave:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/16/2016 5:25:00 PM

Were I to leave Soup, what I would miss most would be 1) your poetry, and 2) your kind and supportive comments. Thank you, Jan.