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Goodbye Pumpkin Pie - 5 Word Challenge

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A river of scintillating tears did fall There was scarcely enough pumpkin pie for all The pie looked so belle I drooled at the smell A winter memory I can still recall Contest 5 word challenge sponsored by Timothy Hicks Pure fiction write I've never tried pumpkin pie! 05~25~16 Five words from my best poems list are: PUMPKIN SCINTILLATING BELLE WINTER RIVER

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2016 10:22:00 AM

WELL DONE, Sweetie PIE

Jan Allison
Date: 5/30/2016 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) One day I may get to try pumpkin pie rather than just write about it lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 5/27/2016 9:56:00 PM

Jan, perfect, love how you got all the 5 words in such a few lines, mine is 25 lines long, gulp, 7 ~

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2016 2:40:00 AM

I have to admit it was a challenge! hugs jan xx

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/26/2016 8:52:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thanks so much Ravi:-)hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/26/2016 6:48:00 AM

Well, the pumpkins are planted. You will have more soon! We may have some in September or perhaps sooner. Not a lot of pumpkin is even needed for a pie.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 6:51:00 AM

I have to admit I've never tried pumpkin let alone pumpkin pie lol:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/26/2016 5:16:00 AM

Mmmm, delicious as a pie and as a Limerick! I think a winner in the making dear, Jan. Good luck and a sweet seven!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios it is quite a challenge to get the 5 words into a poem and for it to make sense:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/26/2016 4:44:00 AM

Really well written:) I'm still wondering how to combine my five words...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/26/2016 6:10:00 AM

Its quite a challenge Jo - good luck with your poem:-) hugs jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/25/2016 6:01:00 PM

Wow, well done! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2016 6:11:00 PM

Thanks Arthur its actually quite a challenge! hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/25/2016 5:42:00 PM

You did extremely well with this challenge, Jan!! I don't have many inspiring words to work with, but will give it a try. hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2016 5:44:00 PM

It was a tough challenge Paul especially as I have never tried pumpkin pie lol - I hope the poem is long enough:-) hugs Jan xx