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"god's Trinity On Limerick"

A Precept Limerick Precept versus concepts in one’s writing, Alone, concepts remain__ problems fighting! Thus these are the two levels, Concepts have not love’s bevel. Precept is above the problems gliding. Thus Love’s precept of one’s own opinion, Promotes one from being chief’s Indian. Problems are below, Where strives of wind blow. Precept answers to Love, concepts break wind. Concept’s judgments of precept, are inept, For natural mind by precept is kept. By mind’s vice of verse, `Tis no Love disperse. One’s inspiration is kept of precept! 8-29-10

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Date: 9/2/2010 8:40:00 PM
Cannot find the one u referred to in your Soup Mail Moses.. did u not write it yet.. if u did the title is missing from one of the poems on your list luv..perhaps that is it.. has to have the same title for all the entries..luv..
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Date: 9/1/2010 4:18:00 PM
Interesting one in these Limericks..Oh! what man can conceive while relying on the Holy Spirit to lead him..Oh! what evil man can conceive when relying on the devil or just carnality of the human mind...Good job..Sara
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Date: 9/1/2010 2:13:00 AM
excellent message here John, enjoyed these limericks. Harry
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Date: 8/31/2010 4:53:00 PM
Wow Moses even in Limerick the message is clear and important.. enjoyed my friend.. my wedding photos are now posted on my blog .. hope u enjoy the view..only ten allowed now by the website..so all the scenes of Italy and the villas and shoppes will be on next month luv.. enjoy..
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:13:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration John. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:28:00 PM
A very nice message you have conveyed here, John. enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:06:00 PM
I am delighted to see that most people are getting this precept poem's message!!!!!!!!!!!!! Smoo____ Cheese, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/29/2010 5:08:00 PM
Great write! Thanks for your support and help! Enjoyed reading your work!
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Date: 8/29/2010 4:56:00 PM
This poem must be read several times and then all is clear and beautiful, I think I am precep(ha ha) because I am always gliding~~
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:53:00 PM
Outstanding trilogy, John. You always write from your heart, the source of love. As you say so cleverly, "concepts break wind." That line made me laugh, but there is some serious wisdom to consider here, my friend. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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