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Foul Play

There once was a star quarterback at the bottom of a stack on his back He thought real fast and let out a blast Then the defense cut him some slack

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Paloma P

Date: 11/18/2016 8:03:00 AM

A blast, eh? As much as I detest the game, I enjoyed this offensive blip! :)

Paloma P
Date: 11/18/2016 10:51:00 AM

Beep beep, get out of my way. Lol ;)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/18/2016 10:13:00 AM

I am humbled and pleased to know that one who writes Rolls Royce can find a smile in the offering of one who writes as a lowly Renault Dauphine. (worst metaphorever!?:-)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/17/2016 6:51:00 AM

Hi John, Lol! This is so funny. Good imagery as well. Do you smell that? lol:-) Alexis

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/18/2016 10:09:00 AM

I blame all my toilet humor on Jan;-) huggerkins ~ j

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/14/2016 8:54:00 PM

Ha, ha, ha that was a good one lim'rik! (Smelly, but funny!;)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/15/2016 8:47:00 AM

most of my sillies stink!

Chris Green

Date: 11/14/2016 5:52:00 PM

This was funny, I'll bet he was a real gas around the locker room. :)

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/15/2016 8:46:00 AM

:-) I spose he was!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/14/2016 1:39:00 PM

I heard they looked for the end zone...but when they he blew that noxious tone...they did scurry...in a hurry... to get their broken noses sown

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/15/2016 8:46:00 AM

must be the new offensive scheme;-)