Flowers

I have gone and I’ve lost me girl Jane, When she asked me for flowers again, But she gave me the gong, Dunno what I did wrong... I brought her self-raising and plain.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/28/2015 1:38:00 PM

You have done a lot of limericks Lindsay and it looks like I have not been doing a lot of reading lately. Listen you buy those flowers every time. ha ha love phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2015 5:15:00 PM

Nice one, Lindsay. Let me find a few more!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/30/2015 3:27:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I do have some more limericks in the pipeline - Lindsay

Nandita Das

Date: 4/27/2015 8:49:00 AM

Oh this one is real good. Clever n witty. You have a great sense of humour. #7

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/27/2015 5:41:00 PM

Hi Nandita... Thanks again for dropping by Nandita. Fifty giggles a day on this site makes my world go 'round so there's plenty of funny poems for us all. Regards - Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/27/2015 5:18:00 AM

:) Can't imagine why she gave you the gong...haha. Good one! A 7. All the best, Lindsay! Kim :)

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/27/2015 5:36:00 PM

Hello Kim... I better reply with roses otherwise you'll give me the gong - bye for now - Lindsay

John Williams

Date: 4/27/2015 3:48:00 AM

Such a clever poem Lindsay. You must enter Jan's limerick competition---you would be a great chance on winning first prize.....this effort today is simply brilliant. Kind regards { and I will bow to you when i meet you} John

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/27/2015 5:34:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by John... Don't you dare bow mate; we're all in a poetry boat together and that's how I like it with all the different creators. Instead of Noah's Ark, I guess you could call us Poets Ark - Catch you John - Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2015 2:37:00 AM

- Well done Limerick, Lindsay !!!! - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 4/27/2015 5:30:00 PM

G'day Anne Lise... thanks for reading and leaving a kind comment. Catch you soon - Lindsay