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Flaws Versus Flawless

Flawless Photo shopping a model. So her neck doesn't have a wattle. She's perfect after this, so her feet you will kiss. Then return to your baby bottle. Flaws To the eyes I am a little rough. In my stomach, I do have a fluff. Wish you could see who I am. Writing again my own slam. For you, I see I wasn't the right stuff For S K A T's contest.

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Date: 2/23/2011 5:19:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Chris, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 3:59:00 PM
I like this, Chris. Glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:56:00 AM
Many congratulations Chris on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:32:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:03:00 PM
Copngratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two limericks.
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:28:00 AM
Hi Chris - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Chris. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Chris
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:25:00 AM
Good one! Congrats on your big win, Chris, Lainie.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congrats Chris on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:36:00 AM
Oh, good, good writing. Congratulations on this 'honestly' rendered work. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:20:00 AM
CHRIS~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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Date: 1/19/2011 4:29:00 AM
I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Chris. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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