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Fishing Woes

Bass fishing on nearby creek trying new rod I bought this week. Got plenty of lures that really ensures a big catch if I don’t need to leak. Creek waters are moving real fast I’m not sure my bladder will last. Got lure on the line it’s reeling just fine but deep water I failed to cast. In an anxious and manly haste a true cast I timely displaced. Latched on to a nest where hornets did rest full bladder no longer encased. Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Fifth Place Winner ~ "Contest Limericks About Fishing” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Freeman May 27, 2011

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Date: 5/14/2011 8:00:00 AM
Many congratulations Caryl on your win in John's fine Fisherman Limerick contest....:)
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:09:00 PM
That last line is a hoot!!! Great job, Caryl !!
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations , Caryl. One of the really funny ones!
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Date: 5/9/2011 11:01:00 AM
Enjoyed this wonderful write.Congrats Caryl on your win . gautami
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Date: 5/9/2011 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carylin John's Fishing contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2011 8:45:00 PM
Very nice. Congrats
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of John Freeman, Caryl
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Date: 5/8/2011 7:31:00 AM
humorous write Caryl. Got me chuckling. Congratulations to you on your win
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Date: 5/8/2011 6:01:00 AM
LOL Many congrats on your win : )
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:49:00 PM
Great job Caryl. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:09:00 PM
best cheers for garening a greeat win, caryl! smile... huggs!
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Date: 5/7/2011 8:11:00 PM
Caryl, Great to see you poem in the winner's corcle. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/7/2011 3:17:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your big win in the fishing Limerick contest my friend..with this really creative write.. enjoy another sweet success with luv and H.M.D. to u ... enjoy..
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:51:00 PM
This is hilarious, Caryl. I can just picture it happening. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2011 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed the fun and humor, Caryl
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Date: 4/26/2011 4:27:00 PM
That would be a nightmare come true..Enjoyed reading this sure winner..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and leaving such kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:56:00 PM
great funny ending, Caryl. If you are alone, you can always just pee on the ground. heehee. I think this one will do great in the contest.
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