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Fisher Mcbride

On the beach sat the fisher McBride With his pole in a stand by his side Then suddenly he had a big bite And his pole took off into flight Up he sprang, his mouth open wide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/10/2015 3:59:00 PM
conjures up quite a picture!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:48:00 PM
made me smile - congrats :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/27/2015 10:46:00 AM
Almost there John LONG/LONG/short/short/LONG - lines 3 & 4 should be shorter - try for 9/9/7/7/9 or 9/9/6/6/9 etc. on the syllable count! You are getting the meter pretty well! Light & Love
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John Squires
Date: 3/2/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks for your help. I will have to try again....never did this style before.

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