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murmurous words spill free and easy beneath a lone tree, wind light and breezy this passion fire starts of two loving hearts my heart flutters frightened and uneasy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/28/2011 11:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:53:00 PM
Hey Rick, good to see you near the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored seventh place win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/27/2011 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:53:00 PM
LOVED this one, Rick. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:46:00 PM
beautiful hearts and their flutter. many hearty congrats for this victory.
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congrats Rick my friend on your wonderful win in the Unspeakable Love contest with another excellent entry ... so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great friend and awesome talent luv..
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:09:00 AM
Beautiful Limerick here! Congrats ^Rick on your well deserved win in this contest---kashinath
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Adeleke, Rick
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Date: 2/26/2011 9:24:00 AM
Wow ! This is an awesome poem & a wonderful entry, congrats on your placement in 'Unspeakable love' contest & thanks for your love & support! Keep writing. Love,always. Adeleke!
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:59:00 PM
I really like this one for first love, Rick! Especially the last line, so fitting.
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Date: 2/16/2011 4:22:00 AM
heart-tugging in content and presentation, rick! i am flustered! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/15/2011 7:32:00 PM
A delightful limerick to read. I remember my first time, and it appears you have described it well with this entry.
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