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Expectations

You're waiting for the phone to ring Measuring the time while you sing Transform love to more Drunken by your roar This day is like a bee's sting. Such a passion driven day Is it all just too cliche Stop thinking so much Let me feel your soft touch Oh please do not betray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/27/2011 7:03:00 PM
Nice little limerick series of longing!
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:07:00 PM
Krisen, well done on both limerick.. tobad we have to expect so much from certain peeps... sure enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem, best of luck in the contest~~
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:46:00 AM
fine write with crisp element of surprise, kristen... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/21/2011 6:19:00 PM
Nice sensual and lovely expectations with a doubt to be betrayed, kristen
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