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Dying To Meet Women

There once was a man on the beach Hoping for women to meet To try to look thin He held his breath in And passed out dead at their feet.

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/30/2010 12:58:00 PM

Dude, this is getting down with the beat. He should have known better. Women love pot belly guys. Great job! Joseph

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/27/2010 10:48:00 AM

Congrats on the win! Dan C

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2010 5:12:00 PM

Congratulations Joe, on your 3ard place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2010 12:36:00 PM

Congrats Joe on your big win in the Bulge contest .. this was awesome and enjoy your victory my friend... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/26/2010 10:07:00 AM

Yes, a winner. I told you so. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/26/2010 9:32:00 AM

Had to laugh at the image of this happening, Joe. I think a lot of folks hold in their breath at the beach. Congratulations on placing third in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Rosemarie Peterson

Date: 5/24/2010 9:06:00 AM

love this write nice job

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/22/2010 8:37:00 PM

lVery funny in a morbid sort of way. I think this is the winner of all that I have seen so far. Joyce

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/22/2010 8:25:00 PM

lol.did he lose his breath? -Always&Forever Lynette

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/22/2010 12:21:00 PM

Oh, this has to win..I will be laughing about thiss all day.BG

Susan Palli

Date: 5/22/2010 11:57:00 AM

I giggled! Loved it but sorry for the old chap.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2010 11:42:00 AM

GOOD ONE!!!! Me really likes! Luv, andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/22/2010 10:56:00 AM

that was adorable, loved it , good luck in the contest

Amy Green

Date: 5/22/2010 10:46:00 AM

Like this one, Joe! Great job!

Katherine Stella

Date: 5/22/2010 10:01:00 AM

LOL reminds me of laurel and hardy loved the imagery in this one should do well for contest also thanks for your kind comment keep up the great writing

John Freeman

Date: 5/22/2010 9:41:00 AM

An't this a grand one, I can't believe a man would do that! Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/22/2010 9:38:00 AM

Men aren't the only ones, who try sucking it in at the beach!!!! A funny limerick, Joe.... (now...you'd better go take a breath..you are turning blue!!!)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/22/2010 9:04:00 AM

Ah yes, the old muscleman at the beach routine...lol. Good luck in the contest. Dan C. ps. There are more than a few of us Cub fans left, otherwise they wouldn't do 2.5 million in fans every year!

Satin Doll Diva

Date: 5/22/2010 8:10:00 AM

So funny Mr. Flach and I appreciate you liking my entry.. so far I have not won anything on this site so I hope it gets better. Satin Doll Diva