Dust

There once was a housewife named Claire Who shook out her mop in the air The dust whirled like stars The Earth, Moon, and Mars- Who’s shaking a dust mop up there? November 11, 2014 ~1st Place~ Contest: Limerick Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Judged: 06/11/2017 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Limericks Clean and Clever Sponsor: Roy Jerden Judged 11/23/2014

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/15/2017 5:18:00 AM

So lovely to read this again Sandra:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/12/2017 4:00:00 PM

Simple, cute, adorable limerick, Sandra!! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Samiha Zubair

Date: 6/12/2017 5:08:00 AM

Beautifully penned down, congrats dear

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:06:00 PM

Thank you, Samiha! Much appreciated! Sandra

J-Mag Guthrie

Date: 6/11/2017 8:20:00 PM

ooo, makes you wonder... Nice one. Congrats.

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, for your nice comment and congrats! Sandra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/11/2017 8:06:00 PM

Love this, Sandra!

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim! Hugs, Sandra

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 6/11/2017 8:03:00 PM

Sandra this poem was outstanding because it transformed the limerick form. It could hold it's own amongst night sky poetry and creation myth poetry. All using the most basic of forms...

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:04:00 PM

Great contest, Cecelia! Thanks for your supportive comments and my nice placement. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 7:41:00 PM

this is adorable, Sandra. BIG congrats,

Sandra Haight
Date: 6/12/2017 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 11/30/2014 2:02:00 AM

Lovely win ~SKAT~

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/24/2014 8:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/26/2014 11:03:00 AM

Hi Maurice, thank you so much!! Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/23/2014 8:44:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 12:56:00 PM

Thank you so much, Brenda. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 11/23/2014 8:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sandra, win your very funny limerick! Hugs, Rhonda

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 12:57:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda, for your comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/23/2014 5:06:00 PM

Dear Sandra, I think this is the first time I've read one of your limericks and it made me laugh out loud! So witty! Congratulations, Carolyn

Sandra Haight
Date: 11/24/2014 12:59:00 PM

Hi Carolyn, actually, I never really wrote a Limerick before, at least, not on purpose! Now I will have to compose more of them! Thanks so much for stopping by with your comment and congratulations. Sandra