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Dreamin Again

If I were to slit my wrist Your life would be gone You see, i can't be your dream Im more than halfway dead Your dream is a lie, Until that last slit across My vein will draw the Blood of hopelessness. Your rose pricked my tears And cold night dreams, Rests ever so softly on my coffin Still as your lying dream.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2010 6:10:00 PM
Emotional write sad, yet enjioyable to read. Been on the brink before realizing that taking ones own life is not an answer nor an end. The only person punished is the person who harms themselves.
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Date: 7/8/2010 5:06:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your extremely creative write tonight.. nothing is as bad as it seems ..u have expressed a tender subject so well. with luv..
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Date: 7/8/2010 4:58:00 PM
Kinda sad that one would be in a relationship that has gotten to this point of emotion..Enjoyed the read..Sara
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