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Don'T Touch My Chocolate Covered Nuts

Some think love and romance are sublime Others feel they're a big waste of time Both views maybe so But there's one thing I know Candy prices are surely a crime! I'll buy her candies and flowers and charms When we kiss I'll hear bells and alarms But one thing can't compare Is when I'm standing there Silently holding her close in my arms! For: Francine Roberts Valentine's Day Limerick contest

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Tobey Hill

Date: 2/10/2011 12:46:00 PM

and I have to agree with you..I had to take out a personal loan to buy my candy this year...good work..TAH

Charles Henderson

Date: 1/30/2011 11:34:00 PM

You fooled me with that title. good limerick. Charles

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 4:42:00 PM

nice one Kory my rising star! Congrad's on your BIG win! Light & Love

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/27/2011 3:10:00 PM

Wow! Thanks everybody for liking this silly limerick. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Kory

John Heck

Date: 1/27/2011 2:47:00 PM

Wonderfully timed meter in this limerick, Kory. Congratulations. A well deserved win. Peace always, John

James Fraser

Date: 1/27/2011 2:12:00 PM

Many congrats Kory on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)

Sarah Comstock

Date: 1/27/2011 1:54:00 PM

Your title was desciptive.. I feel like I was lead on..... no it was a real good read. nicely done.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2011 9:28:00 AM

Congratulations Kory on your win in Francines's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2011 3:50:00 PM

Good one Kory. Congrat's on your win big. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2011 8:35:00 AM

Cory, Congratulations on your spot at the top. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/26/2011 6:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win Kory, enjoyed this so glad to see it on the winner's list ;) Wilma

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2011 10:01:00 PM

congratulations on your big win with this great limerick. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 9:43:00 PM

I just knew this one would rate high. Congratulations, Kory!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Kory

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2011 6:39:00 PM

Terrific job, Kory!!! Congrats on your well deserved win!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 5:55:00 PM

Congrats Kory on your super win in the Valentine Day contest with this awesome entry luv... enjoy your top spot...

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/25/2011 5:49:00 PM

congrats on your second place win in my contest Kory and thanks for the support

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/25/2011 8:42:00 AM

that second limerick of yours sure makes those steep chocolate prices all worth it ;) enjoyed reading this sweet and romantic write--lucky girl ;) -- wish you the best in the contest Kory & thanks for dropping by my poems :) -- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:25:00 AM

Oh yes, the title surely does grab the reader's attention. My naughty mind was filled with images, Kory. As far as I'm concerned, I'd rather have a hug such as you describe in your second verse, than all the chocolates, flowers and charms. Hugs always come from the heart. And you're right about the prices of candy, too, especially at movie theaters! Great entry for Francine's contest and I wish you success. Love, Carolyn

Kris Walters

Date: 1/23/2011 6:26:00 PM

You got me with the title here!! Fun limericks- well done! hugs, Kris

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 3:19:00 PM

Sweet one, Kory, and yes, the price of chocolates..... outrageous!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/22/2011 10:23:00 AM

Kory, I really love your entry for Francine's contest. All the best to you ;-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2011 6:19:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this lively and romantic work..Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work brought a ray of sunshine to my other lavender sunrise.thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2011 6:12:00 PM

Nice, cute and lovely write on valentine's day, Kory

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2011 6:06:00 PM

I can get two pound heart-shaped boxes at 75% off two days after Valentine's Day at a nearby drug store. Your limerick is well-worded and a joy to read.