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Don'T Give Up

Don't give up the ship, this ship called life The magic it provides is beyond paradise Paradise on earth Discover it's worth By enjoying each day and being nice to some mice

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/12/2017 8:36:00 AM

lol my morning is now open had my Jacko smiles. Your poems lift my heart. great write.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/12/2017 8:45:00 AM

YOU ARE SWEET!!! So you're good for the day then! Okay, I can relax! Love and Hugs, your good friend, Jacko!!! xxx

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 8/12/2017 6:41:00 AM

Unique Master of Limerick, as usually you remind me of Robinson I have taken with because he never gave up. He saved himself and civilization or maybe rebuilt the own world. Magister, let me be your faithful disciple: Friday.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/12/2017 8:03:00 AM

Mucho thanks my friend for dropping by with your comments... Jack !!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2017 6:39:00 AM

Why be nice to mice? They chewed the wires on my grandfather's car and made it undrivable the other day! It cost $170 to fix...and the mice won't pay for it! I don't want them to die for it, but they should go into the field where my other grandmother lived...and roam free! Your poem was very nice though, I enjoyed reading it this fine day! What a harmonious piece this one was, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/12/2017 8:05:00 AM

Bet you thought, "has he gone serious on us! The last line should clear that up! LOL