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Divorce Fuss

Haiku That evil Sunday A downpour of sadness from the sky We went separate ways Limerick The bright Friday of thirteen I married him in my teen And in twenties decided to part For he drank like a silly wart This saved some damage to my spleen Couplet Marriage is the name of a see-saw And divorce is its major flaw

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Adell Foster

Date: 12/4/2010 6:19:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win Tahera I truly enjoyed the read ;-) Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Linda Milgate

Date: 12/3/2010 7:28:00 PM

Your couplet, my favorite. Good job.

Marilyn Hernandez

Date: 12/2/2010 3:13:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Yours is one of my favorites!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2010 2:48:00 PM

Congrats to you too... what a great write you have done...love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2010 12:39:00 PM

Congratulations on this high place win in the contest, Tahera

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 12/2/2010 8:53:00 AM

Very awesome couplet to end this well put together set, enjoyed it. Congrats on your win:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2010 6:54:00 AM

Tahera) Congratulations! With your awesome 3some of 3 differ forms. I had lots of fun reading every entry. I was surprised every one pulled off a beautiful and amazing Job to my request. lol,, and the whole time I thought it was going to be a tough contest,...p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2010 6:21:00 AM

Congrats Tahera my sweet friend on your big win in P.D.'s divorce contest with this brilliant entry luv.. enjoy your top spot on the winners list today with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/2/2010 5:47:00 AM

Congratulations Tahera for your win in P.D.'s "Divorce Club Contest". Love, Carol

Adell Foster

Date: 11/29/2010 6:37:00 PM

Tahera, the emotions are very well conveyed within the lines of this well written trio , I truly enjoyed the read. ;-) Good Luck in the contest ~ Adell

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 7:59:00 PM

WOW! I LOVE LL 3 GOOD LUCK,, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Diane Locksley

Date: 11/24/2010 1:03:00 PM

Wow, this is awesome, Tahera. The first verse is so sad, but the other two are really funny. Good luck in the divorce club contest. Best to you, Diane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/24/2010 11:37:00 AM

Wow! I really love these poems, Tahera. You managed to find humor in divorce with your funny limerick and couplet. The haiku is a good description of how divorce must feel to people who thought they would spend their lives together. Excellent writing, my friend. Wishing you peace and love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2010 10:52:00 PM

Clever thoughts you put in here, Tahera! I have to agree with Andrea over what I liked best in your entry-- :) -- wish you the best!-- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2010 7:03:00 PM

My fav was the couplet and the last line of the limerick. That rocked! Good luck in the contest. Clever of you to do it this way. I think I will try to do the humorous approach as well. LUv Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/23/2010 3:50:00 PM

this is so good,yet heaps of sadness in there. Harry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/23/2010 1:18:00 PM

Nice thoughts with humor and quite frolicsome, Good luck in the contest, tahera

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 5:32:00 AM

Again a brilliant write and contest entry Tahera.. am working on mine today ..thankxxx for your prayers for my Ron.. we will wait and see.. appreciate..my friend.. good luck in P.D.'s new contest.. this one is a sure winner list competitor.. luv..

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 11/23/2010 12:07:00 AM

Love the diversity in this writing. The use of several forms works well for the subject concerned. My heart goes out to you if it is your current situation... Kindest thoughts and good luck, Anna-Marie.