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Discovery

For a week Jean was married to Jake, Jean discovered that Jake was a snake, At a shop now in town, For sale a wedding gown, With a note - worn once by mistake.

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/25/2015 5:59:00 PM

A big mistake it seems. You are so good at Limericks. love phyl

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/31/2015 3:40:00 AM

I dunno Phyllis. I think we all have our own expressive talent for others to appreciate - Lindsay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2015 10:38:00 PM

THis is just GREAT, you are a wonderful poet of humor~ oh, and about you thinking I could think of ways to spend my six months of life at a red light: yes, that is also the time I spend putting my make up on!!!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 6/3/2015 6:17:00 PM

G'day Andrea... its catch up day - apology for being late. Must have been stuck at a red light, 'cause I wasn't putting make up on. I'm pleased you got a giggle - Lindsay

Tim Smith

Date: 5/15/2015 8:10:00 AM

Glad she got out

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:53:00 PM

G'day Tim... not quite in time though - thanks mate - Lindsay

John Williams

Date: 5/15/2015 4:31:00 AM

Ahhhhh, marriage---if only she'd known before......good one Lindsay-----John

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:48:00 PM

Like most things in life John, there is short and long; good and bad - thanks mate - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 5/15/2015 1:54:00 AM

you see wedding dresses for sale - 'worn once' - I should certainly hope so lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:47:00 PM

Hello Jan... every bride certainly hopes so Jan. Statistics beg to differ though, and that's the sad bit - catch you Jan - Lindsay

Md Johnson

Date: 5/14/2015 10:21:00 PM

Fools rush in...Funny lim.

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:45:00 PM

Hello Michael... they most certainly do, and there are consequences - thanks Michael - Lindsay

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/14/2015 8:05:00 PM

Oh...hahaha. She was so blind she didn't recognize the signs? Funny...though kind of sad, Lindsay. Good morning!

Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/16/2015 10:43:00 PM

G'day Kim... I could say that this is a true story that happened in the family twelve months ago... and it did. More shock than anything - Lindsay