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Dirty Eyes of Judgment

On everyone’s deeds, he takes a swab every mistake faces his punch and blab what a smelling pear with infected ear his sample, rejected by every lab.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/21/2017 8:40:00 AM
the poem made me feel as if there are to many bad guys in the world and God will get them all... :-|
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:39:00 AM
Yeah, there seem to be. Thank you so much Verlecia
Date: 5/20/2017 6:28:00 PM
I love the double meaning allusion of this poem, Funom. Very creative and skillfully written. As a bonus, it also drew a chuckle from me because it was so spot on truthful. A very fine poem indeed. A cool 7! Love and peace, bro.
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Date: 5/16/2017 6:26:00 PM
Poor fella it must be hard to be so out of step.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2017 12:18:00 PM
yes Scott thirtyseven, Thank you so much for stopping by
Date: 5/16/2017 11:39:00 AM
Hi Funom , very witty Limerick :)))
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Niall FUlham
Date: 5/16/2017 11:30:00 AM
Your limericks are interesting. i like that!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2017 11:18:00 AM
That is a great Limerick my friend, I have missed your beautiful and witty poetry. Better not come near that judgmental one...
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/20/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Darren WHite

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