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Desire

Fulfilling desire can toll A sense of relief for the soul; But death will begin With the meaning of sin: Desire that’s out of control.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/2/2010 9:44:00 PM
Such few words can say so much. I write things like this too. good write Congratulations on being featured. Rhonda Hero
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:16:00 PM
This is really well written! I think it would be absolutely incredible if desire wasn't repeated. Like, maybe "Longing," instead? Either way, the writer's opinion is most important, and you've done a great job on it. Good luck!
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Date: 6/29/2010 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your terrific poetry being featured this week Brenden. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2010 5:44:00 AM
Oh so true well done you !!! Sarah x
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:56:00 AM
Hey, this is a wonderful piece; enjoy the honor of having your poem being featured this week. Please, keep your pen alive and keep up the great work!. You are great! Love, ~Adeleke.
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:46:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:41:00 PM
Perfect limerick meter and great message. Congratulations. Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations Brenden on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:39:00 AM
Congrats, Brenden. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:11:00 PM
Yes, that human desire, has brought destruction upon many happy lives,Brenden. A fine presentation with your worthy poem. Thanks for your support, and congratulatios with this fine poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:19:00 AM
Well penned Limerick
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:14:00 AM
Very well writen!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/23/2010 7:56:00 AM
how true this is,,,desire is such a strong and overpowering force
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