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Deena and Dale

Have you heard about this old tale About a dog Deena and a goat Dale What a unique pair Love was in the air Until Dena the dog got stuck in pail 10-19-17 Alexis Y.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/21/2017 4:45:00 AM

I missed the joke on this one, Alexis. Enlighten please. Good limerick poetic structure though. Love and joy always.

Silent One

Date: 10/20/2017 9:14:00 AM

haha.. Nice one Alexis.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/19/2017 11:08:00 PM

hahaha,,,, I love this poem it is so funny , Alexis.. Hugs Eve

Joseph May

Date: 10/19/2017 9:48:00 PM

lol...Nice Limerick Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2017 8:59:00 PM

Nice one, Alexis. YOu called it free verse, but it's limerick. Is it for the limerick contest?

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/19/2017 9:19:00 PM

No It’s not for the contest. I will go and change it to limerick. Thanks for visiting me today:-) Alexis