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Darren and Lisa By the Sea -- Three --

"Darren and Lisa by the sea" One fine day such whispers called to go to the sea Darren and Lisa were set with cookies and tea All was well along the shore hearing tides and their roar there wasn't anything they couldn't foresee Hold the thought as a seagull stops by their side He flew from high above with such force and stride Their snacks were gone in a flash taken was Darren's stash Lisa replies "next time its the countryside" SkyWatcher - 05-09-17 note ok all you Limerick experts you can be honest and true this was my attempt at the Limerick this entry is three out of three I've only practiced this twice privately I somehow now had the courage to post I have seen so many floating around in this format have a wonderful day thank you

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Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 5/12/2017 2:17:00 PM

Great fun limericks. I enjoyed them tremendously and, if you don't mind my saying, you can't stop since you just got started. Lisa, more, more!:) Amitiés

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/13/2017 4:41:00 AM

Morning Anne-Marie. You are priceless and such a gem. From the heart Anne-Marie, Thank you very much. Honestly. Your review is a gift. I was practicing and thought I would have fun with the ocean and Darren. Because of your generosity if I can think of something funny or of worth I will give it another try. Again, thank you ever so much. Have a wonderful day and Mother's Day as well.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/11/2017 8:23:00 AM

Lol...pesky birds

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 1:31:00 PM

Hiya Tim. Top of the Afternoon. Yes, those darn seagulls. Ain't it grand. (lol) Thank you so much Tim. Enjoy the night and I will see you on your page.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2017 8:21:00 AM

- Bravo, Lisa ... - Limerick is a form I find very hard - Well done - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2017 3:24:00 AM

.... :))) ... me too ... ( A Free Verse girl :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 1:33:00 PM

Hello Anne. Good Evening. Thank you ever so much. I say Bravo to your words and review. Honestly. I'm honored by the generosity. I think I'm done with the Limerick for now. I'm so the Free Verse girl always. Have a wonderful night and I will see you on your page.

Chris Green

Date: 5/11/2017 7:59:00 AM

You couldn't have chosen a more perfect theme Lisa, you two on the beach because I know of the love both of you have for the sea. Another fun poem to read this morning. I can see Darren really liked it.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 1:37:00 PM

Oh Thank you Chris. I know right. How could I not incorporate the sea and if it were the sea it had to be Darren too. (lol) but true. Thank you Chris for being so generous. I so am the forever Free Verse girl and will remain with free verse. Have a great night. I will see you on your page.

Darren White

Date: 5/11/2017 5:35:00 AM

Hey! seagulls: give back those cookies!!!! Darren and Lisa bought Icecream next time // In the countryside: vanilla and lime // Lisa yelled: yikes, help!! bees!! // Hold my ice, Darren please? // Darren licked it away in no time ;)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 1:35:00 PM

-- smile - you bet - I will stick to the Mighty Free Verse Darren. Have a great night. I will see you on your page.

Darren White
Date: 5/11/2017 7:05:00 AM

I absolutely love it Lisa, and it was so much work! Limericks seem easy, but they aren't at all.....

Lisa Ricci
Date: 5/11/2017 5:40:00 AM

Exactly Darren. (lol) I hope you approve of my efforts and for taking you along. Remember this Penguin always will it be the sea. You are a gem. Thank you always Darren. Have a wonderful afternoon. Now about that ice cream.....