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Daddy Dear

A Father taught the birds and bees, To put a lock between her knees. But, a boy was so clever. Saying love was forever. And now she has a bump daddy sees.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/23/2012 8:45:00 AM
I am enjoying reading a vast array of poetry this morning. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Christopher and the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/23/2012 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 2/23/2012 1:26:00 AM
I was taught it was an asprin between the knees and that would stop daddy getting a headache, like it xx
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/23/2012 3:17:00 PM
LOL! You are right. But, aspirin had too many syllables.
Date: 2/22/2012 8:44:00 PM
A great write, truly enjoyed reading it and yes, it made me laugh. More then enough was said in just those 5 lines.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/23/2012 3:17:00 PM
Thank you!

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