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Coffee House

"Coffee House" a savory swig energizes bones one swallow electrifies tasting cones an instant caffeine rush causes blah cheeks to pink blush pure Pepsi creates haunting moans. a tingling sensation provides power charging battery for 24 hours but "diet" won't do the "hard stuff's" my brew Pepsi fragrance as potent as flowers. one day when Life's journey is done and "the other side's" calling for fun no Coke, Dew, or "7" as I step into Heaven hoping Pepsi is their "Number One".
*For Craig's Funny Poem Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/31/2015 10:05:00 AM
ALWAYS IN MY HEART..... LINDA
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Date: 3/13/2014 1:43:00 AM
a fun read... . RIP. ~Love you forever your little bff ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/24/2012 5:40:00 PM
You had me at..... Pepsi fragrance as potent as flowers! Enthralled with this stand out line, Linda Marie...An outstanding write for Nate's contest. I returned to work last week. First day was hard and the second day I was getting back in the swing of things more...Thankful situation is not more serious. :) Tx for asking, lady...I hear u got a new pup which I want to congratulate you on! Please try and squeak out an entry for the doggie contest if u have the time...I will post a few this week but will not be on the Soup a whole bunch. Luv to u...gwendolen
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:21:00 AM
LOL, love these limericks, Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/23/2012 8:11:00 PM
This is a grandiose write my dear friend! You have expressed so eloquently your love of a Pepsi, however I must counter with a great Coke! Ha ha, as I sit here talking about Coke, I'm drinking a Diet Pepsi! Oh well, I just love a great soda, diet or otherwise! Your limericks are wonderful Linda-Marie! I have enjoyed them immensely! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 6/23/2012 6:05:00 PM
Linda, I think Pepsi is a bit sweeter in taste than Coke, so it's actually my favorite even though I wrote about Diet Coke. Have you tried the new Next Pepsi?It's half diet, and it's like the real thing! Good entry!
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Date: 6/23/2012 4:18:00 PM
I take a Pepsi with you Linda-Marie....well done for the contest.....hope for a win !!! - Have a warm and sunny weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:47:00 PM
this is just mesmerizing, love it,
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:22:00 PM
Enjoyed the Coffee in the coffee House, loved always, bl
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Date: 6/23/2012 1:12:00 PM
Oh reminds me I had better try and write a poem on my fav thing--coffee. LOVE your poem and hope all is well with you. Good luck on Nathan's contest.
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:21:00 PM
Winning material for sure..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.Don't any of them taste like they once did..They have changed the formula on all those wonderful drinks..If you are ever in the Atlanta area be sure to go to the Coke museum and try the Beverly..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:19:00 PM
Well written......:) Best of luck in the contest :)
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Date: 6/23/2012 12:02:00 PM
Well done! Enjoyed this a lot. Good luck! Tanya
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Date: 6/23/2012 11:21:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. I go for good strong southern coffee myself and a cold coca-cola is my second choice. Take care, Carpe Diem, Jancarl
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Date: 6/23/2012 11:11:00 AM
enjoyed, love elizabeth
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Date: 6/23/2012 10:49:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today. I also like Pepsi, but love birch beer. Have a good weekend.
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Date: 6/23/2012 10:23:00 AM
I need to smile just now Linda...Thank you ever so much! Peace and blessings.
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Date: 6/23/2012 9:59:00 AM
well I can live without a lot of things but Pepsi is not one of them.. I am drinking it all day long.. and keeps me going strong ..so enjoy poets with luv..
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