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Chilling On the Coast

Life is pleasant on the Atlantic coast Fishing is surely what I enjoy most Songs of gulls surrounding me Colorful shells line the sea And of my exploits I feel I must boast The breeze is refreshing as winds pick up I cast out hoping for something to sup Though the tides aren’t moving I am always still grooving Then with a smile I spy a fish close up It’s just a tiny minnow swimming past Oh yes, he’s small, but he might be the last So I reach down with my net He splashes and gets me wet On a summer day I have chilled out fast *Entry for Yasmin’s “Letting Your Hair Down” contest by Carolyn Devonshire. Written 6/19/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/29/2012 11:32:00 AM
carolyn congrats on your win, I would love to go fishing with you....David
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:41:00 PM
Glad to see you are still entering and winning. I hope you are not getting wet. I heard Dand Anne's town is in the midst of the flooding. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/27/2012 12:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2012 9:02:00 AM
I just happened to mention you to my friend Sharon Weimer. She said she had been fishing on Sunday, and it made me think of you, and your love of the ocean. What a wonderful way to relax and enjoy nature!! Hope you are doing better, Carolyn!!
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Date: 6/27/2012 8:05:00 AM
congrats Caarolyn on a super win for a top notch write.. hoping u are feeling better .. our prayers are continually with u luv..
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Date: 6/27/2012 1:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Carolyn xx
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Date: 6/19/2012 7:37:00 PM
This is a perfect way to relax and chill! I have my couch and my poetry to relax, but I do have to say I like your method too! Awesome poem my friend, awesome poem! Good luck in the contest! Great Work Carolyn!!
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