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Busting Their Spleen

Everyone has a giggle trigger it seems If you find it, just watch the happiness beam Their smiles will be broad Like a big old bullfrog They'll wind up howling and busting their spleen © Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

Date: 4/19/2015 12:47:00 PM

Giggle trigger? What do you mean?... That hilarious laughter that is so keen?... Or those rolling on the floor as they careen?... As they double over in laughter supreme?... Gee! Never heard of what you mean...

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 3:30:00 PM

Cute eh!!! "Giggle trigger" You'll have to pay me if you want to use... but you dear Carol, I'll give you a special deal!!! LOL xxx

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/19/2015 2:01:00 AM

They say laughter heals...a busted spleen does not sound very healing!! This one is really cute! Another great poem! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 7:18:00 AM

Imagine a world without laughter!!! I'd cash in my chips... ah... big talk... suicide's not an option! I'm a big scaredy cat!!! Love and big big hugs, Jacko xxx