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Bright Yellow Curls

When I was a wee little girl, My hair had bright yellow curls. I liked them a lot ‘Till my mom cut them off, And that was the end of my world.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:49:00 PM

Jay, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jay Snyder

Date: 12/7/2015 7:01:00 AM

Thank you everyone for your supporting comments. I'm actually just a high school student, and this was an assignment for my speech and writing class.

Francis Osho

Date: 12/6/2015 7:46:00 PM

very nice jay.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 6:40:00 PM

Hi Jay, what a cute Limerick! This is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 5:48:00 PM

Jay, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT