Bo Feasted On Roasted Silkworm Seed

Bo feasted on roasted silkworm seed And felt in his stomach a stampede Newton's third law of motion A dollop of e-motion A commotion, on Po's head he peed © RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 18 December 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/18/2014 4:02:00 PM

smiling excellent pen rajat

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/19/2014 1:33:00 AM

love liam.god bless--rajat

Jan Allison

Date: 12/18/2014 9:17:00 AM

made me chuckle:-) Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/18/2014 10:40:00 AM

Thanks Jan, but I think we must have taste of insects--so graceful. "caterpillar soup" "Beetle pudding" Ladybug Ice cream"..not a bad idea eh? Love-rajat.

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/18/2014 7:36:00 AM

Lol, good one, poor Po!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/18/2014 10:36:00 AM

Love Cas-rajat