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Black-Water Blues

Diz Cajonne dey call Thibodaux Paddle dis girl in his Pirogue Den he see dem unmention Dad tool stan at attention She slap him stick HARD doncha' know Dad pole shrink awful fas he yell whoa! Sha, whad did you swat dad ting fo? Now it at parade rest Like diz bird in a nest She-say-"I-scared-a'-dem-SNAKE-buddy-ohh!" PD's contest

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Date: 8/12/2013 8:10:00 AM
This is so funny! Straight to favorites. 7777777
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:33:00 AM
Tim, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Tim. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2012 9:48:00 PM
hahahaha, like cajun limerick or somepun!!! LOVE this one. Big congrats.
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Date: 6/11/2012 7:00:00 PM
Congrats, Tim. Excellent. Great job. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:44:00 PM
TIM, , CONGRATS WITH YOUR AWESOME LIMERICK,,, XOX~PD
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Date: 6/8/2012 11:28:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS!! In my fav's <3
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Date: 6/6/2012 6:32:00 PM
LOL still being full on naughty I see..how are you cher? Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2012 11:36:00 AM
GREAT! Simply great! Mike
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