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Bees

On a summer day so hot and sunny I watched a bee in a hive make honey And as I went to pass He stung me in the grass (fooled you, didn’t I) And I said hey man, that isn’t funny

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James Fraser

Date: 2/14/2011 11:27:00 AM

hehe, you stung me with this one also Vince. I just love Limerick's along these funny lines. Many thanks for your always kind words.....:)

Susan Mills

Date: 9/2/2010 9:40:00 AM

I think you've created some buzz, haha! Love, Susan

Alana Tye

Date: 8/26/2010 5:16:00 PM

Hahaha, fooled me for sure when it stung you in the grass :P Thanks for the laugh! Cheers, Lana

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/12/2010 7:03:00 AM

great brain rhyme!! yep it was in my mind before I could stop it.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2010 6:35:00 PM

Congrats Vince on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this good one.. enjoy a big win today..with luv..happy weekend..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 10:18:00 PM

Hey, congratulations with your HM. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 8/6/2010 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations, Vince. On your supprising ending, Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2010 10:56:00 AM

Koolio poem, made me chuckle. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem, Vince >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 8:50:00 AM

Vince, I loved this and it would have ranked higher with the stipulated syllable count. But we couldn't ignore the humor. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/6/2010 8:45:00 AM

Congratulations Vince on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's / John Freeman's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/5/2010 2:57:00 PM

Funny Vince. I have a bee around this year. He seems to like the deck and I don't want to swat him so I stay out of his way. Cute poem. God Bless Phyl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2010 6:17:00 PM

HI, Vince, this is cute. I swear almost every entry is on BEES and that is one insect that never even came to me before i realized I was too late to even try for the contest at all. haha. LUv, Andrea