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Bawdy Bawdy

She watched, as he rose to attention Her desire was too hot to mention From pink lips passion flows She reaches for his hose A bit short, he needs an extension Not a limerick guy, I hope I got it right. For Roy Jergen's Bawdy, Bawdy, bawdy miss Clawdy contest.

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/17/2014 9:12:00 AM

Interesting one. Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2014 7:19:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment.. Linda

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2014 9:01:00 AM

I'll give you a 7 rating for this one Richard! Very witty:) I notice you're on the winners' list....congrats! // paul [pls inversion of to and too]

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 9:14:00 AM

Thanks Paul.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/14/2014 12:03:00 AM

Richard, :)Congratulations on your win. "Linda"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:53:00 AM

Thanks Linda.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2014 6:05:00 PM

I may copy and paste congrats but I have read your work and find it exceptional…Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:53:00 AM

You are kind Sara.

Elaine George

Date: 6/9/2014 1:09:00 PM

Toooooooooooooo funny! Many congrat's on your win, Richard. Elaine

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/14/2014 8:54:00 AM

Thanks Elaine.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/9/2014 7:29:00 AM

lol very good Rick congrats on win hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Shadow.

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 7:31:00 AM

Richard, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:47:00 AM

Thanks SKAT.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2014 9:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, RichARD

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2014 9:45:00 PM

One of THE funniest ones on the winner list. Congrats my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:48:00 AM

I'm glad you like it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/7/2014 8:06:00 PM

[from pink lips passion flowed/ as she sword swallowed his hose/seemed to her he'd need more attention] Congrad's on you BIG win!!! ;) Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:53:00 AM

I noticed on a few of the entries you have rewritten the lines. May I ask why???

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/7/2014 7:38:00 PM

Oh my goodness! what a winner, I laughed out loud! Very great! good job

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:50:00 AM

Thanks Casarah.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/29/2014 1:30:00 PM

Hahahaha hilarious Richard..:) witty :too!!! GBU

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/9/2014 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Olive.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2014 8:17:00 PM

Yes, YOU GOT IT RIGHT> one of the best I have seen for humor!!! A little suggestion in line two: Her desire was too hot to mention (I added a word for syllable count and changed spelling on the "to" words). Check it on a syllable counter, but I am pretty sure "desire" is only two syllables, so that is why you needed an extra one.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/26/2014 7:36:00 AM

Thanks, that is a good suggestion.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2014 4:29:00 PM

Dear Richard, you definitely got the humor in your poem! I'm still laughing. I am a limerick person, but not a meter maid. If this were my contest, you'd place high! You'll surely get a laugh from Roy! Wishing you success, Carolyn

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/23/2014 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn I have only written a couple of Limericks so this was a bit of a challenge for me. I love your Meter Maid comment, you have made me smile.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/22/2014 4:17:00 AM

very funny and a bit naughty lol Rick good luck in contest hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2014 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Shadow.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/21/2014 8:12:00 AM

Oh, My oh MY! Poor guy! ;) Funny limerick, Richard. Be sure to change to to too! I don't know if Roy is strict on syllable count, but the first 2 and the last line are to be 7 syllables and the 3rd and 4th, five syllables each. The rhyming scheme is perfect! ;) Naughty, naughty you! ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/21/2014 8:33:00 AM

His rules said 99669. I am not that familiar with the form, he described this as a classic form.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/19/2014 9:53:00 PM

I don't know if it's right but it sure is funny

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/20/2014 6:19:00 PM

Thanks Tim.