Bart

There was an old man on a cart, Acquaintances knew him as Bart, As he only ate beans, He inflated his jeans, And smelt of a permanent fart… Inspired by She’s Like the Wind (which I misheard as She’s Got the Wind, lol) For Giorgio’s A Song Inspires a Poem contest

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Skat A

Date: 2/10/2014 6:17:00 PM

Love it, Jack.... SKAT

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/19/2014 9:49:00 AM

Beautiful song misinterpreted so wrong. The world of mistaken understanding is where the doodle lives in the subconsious. Love a good limy Jack. Enjoyed! Peace. :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/10/2014 6:37:00 PM

Yes I think there is a lot of wind in your poem ha ha. How are you Jack? We are getting thru a very cold spell for this last month. I thought i would get some writing done but have not done one poem. Must give myself a talking too and get a pen in the hand. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2014 10:37:00 AM

Way to go..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2014 11:53:00 PM

What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win,Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2014 8:51:00 PM

Jack, a fine poem... love it... Linda

David Fisher

Date: 1/2/2014 8:34:00 PM

Smells like a...I mean sounds like a winner to me. Funny stuff, and go Bart go.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/1/2014 9:58:00 PM

You sure do bring humor to my eyes and my heart my friend! You are super funny, a grandiose poem here this evening! Great Work Jack!! I hope you had a Good New Years Day my friend, thank you for my e card that you sent me, I really do appreciate all that you send (especially the Halloween ones, they are totally awesome!!)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2014 5:19:00 PM

hahahaaha. BEST funny one I have read today. you are amazing!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2014 4:44:00 PM

Chuckling good..Reads like a winner..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my pages..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/1/2014 3:13:00 PM

Patrick Swayze, may he rest in peace, would be rolling with laughter after reading this, Jack! Great job with your entry! I'm sure it will do very well in the contest! Happy New Year, too...again. LOL Love and peace for the new year.. xx Annalise