Get Your Premium Membership

Bad Ghoulish Goblin

There once was a bad ghoulish goblin. Thump, thump on a crutch he was hobblin’. It was Halloween night. He dared to give a fright. But he fell to the ground; he was wobblin’. © November 4, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/29/2010 4:32:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in John Freeman's "Halloween Limerick Contest". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/26/2010 11:17:00 AM
Made me chuckle with this one Dane Ann, many congrats on your win > have a lovely weekend >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 11:10:00 AM
cute one , congrats on your win in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 4:15:00 AM
haha another great comical one with a nice beat. So many wonderful ones in this contest. congratulations, Dane Ann
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2010 3:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 9:15:00 PM
Are you sure it wasn't the pirate that was wobblin' on his crutch, Dane? Funny write and congrats on the win. Dan C
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 8:59:00 PM
Dane....Congrats on notching up big win in the contest........ Happy Thanksgiving.....Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 8:09:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in John's contest with this cool Limerick luv.. enjoy another big win tonight my friend..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 4:39:00 PM
Great win Dane Anne. Congratlations. Love, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 2:47:00 PM
For some reason I keep seeing you as this goblin, Dane Ann. A funny poem, dear. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 2:26:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Dane
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 2:02:00 PM
haha, this was sure cute, Dane Ann. Congratulations. I Hope you are ready for Thanksgiving tomorrow.Luv, Anrea
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2010 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your "Ghoulish Goblin's third place, happy thanksgiving, Dane. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 11/4/2010 6:08:00 AM
LOL Guess you know a bit about hobblin' and wobblin', my friend. You gave us a great laugh with your limerick and I hope you'll enter it in John Freeman's contest. I see you wrote something on elections so I didn't read it in hope you will enter it in my contest. It's great to see you posting again, Dear Dane Ann! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs