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At the Age of Thirteen

Used to look up at the clouds and dream Shapes reminded me of mounds of whipped cream Delightful summer days Dreaming life away As the pretty fillies caused my ears to emit steam (They still do!) © Jack Ellison 2015

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/12/2015 2:24:00 PM

Whipped cream steamed dreams is the way to go...If you want to succeed in this one act show...don't fumble and fuss...become one of us...follow the script and your happiness will flow

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2015 6:52:00 AM

You nailed it my good good buddy... go Jays go! Oops! Getting ready for 2016!

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/12/2015 2:20:00 PM

Santa Jack to dream his life away?... Nope! Can't see it! In no way!... He's still in the middle of life's ballet... Giving us more funnies every day... We're more likely to find him in his tutu while in innocent play...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2015 6:50:00 AM

"likely to find him in his tutu" have you been peeking??? xoxox

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/12/2015 8:11:00 AM

What s in a number.? .Im sure you still do.Lovely avatar Santa : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2015 8:15:00 AM

PRETTY GIRLS SURE DO!!!!! Thank you my dear sweet charming Charmaine!!! See, you name was perfectly chosen!!! Love, Santa xoxox