At Sunset

_________________________ a beautiful love shared by two bound in Gods word near the ocean of blue happiness did begin together until the end as she softly whispered "I Do" _________________________ Poet Rick Parise Picture 4 JT76861

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Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 4:55:00 AM

Many congrats ^Rick on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2011 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/11/2011 6:24:00 AM

congrats Rick, beautiful tribute. Harry

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/11/2011 5:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/11/2011 4:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ^Rick in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/10/2011 11:26:00 PM

Great win Rick. Love, Joyce

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/10/2011 11:03:00 PM

One of the most lovely write. Many congrats dear friend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2011 8:00:00 PM

you make me drool, rixck! … my happy cheers to you for the special win :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2011 2:36:00 PM

Rick, this is simplicity that speaks volumes. I really like the way you took the challenge here. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2011 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Rick

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/10/2011 11:09:00 AM

Ah very romantic how you ended this Rick-- enjoyed this one :) Congrats on your win :)

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/10/2011 11:07:00 AM

Portrayal of such intense and beautiful feelings in these few words.Congratulations Rick on your win..Gautami

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/10/2011 10:27:00 AM

Well deserved placement with this thoughtfull write Rick, congrats!

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2011 10:19:00 AM

Good to see your poem in the top 7, Rick, Congratulations on your honored 7th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2011 8:02:00 AM

Congrats Rick on your success in my contest luv..with this stunning entry ... thankxx for your constant support and kind words always luv..and your friendship too..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/22/2011 5:16:00 PM

very romantic! Light & Love

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/15/2011 12:34:00 AM

enjoyed the thoughts expressed!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2011 8:07:00 PM

She is gonna love this, Rick. Good for you to think of one like this!