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A huge pregnant young lady named Jill Bungee jumped for a bit of a thrill When her baby flew out Jill did scream and then shout 'Now there’s two to walk back down the hill!' Fiction write for limerick contest Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer 06-03-17

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/12/2017 4:23:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Jan. I hope that by now baby has got over the ordeal:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2017 4:24:00 PM

Lol Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2017 7:59:00 PM

Congrats, Jan. I like Robert's response that she got jacked. It was a great scene. Can't believe I Had not seen it before!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Andrea guess I have lost my touch lol I wrote 3 poems and kept changing my mind which one to enter ... looking at some of the poems I should have gone with my usual poop :-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/11/2017 6:43:00 PM

Funny :) congratulations on your win ~*

Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2017 10:51:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/4/2017 9:56:00 PM

Now that Jill got Jacked. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 9:11:00 AM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/4/2017 11:59:00 AM

Lol! Jan, this is hilarious. I'm with Paul, I could just imagine the scene. This one caused me to bust out laughing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis PS, You should write a book of limericks. Because you are that good!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2017 9:12:00 AM

who would have ever thought we would be writing books Alexis - out of my hubbies cancer something amazing has happened in my life!:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 6/4/2017 12:26:00 PM

Me too. Let me know when the book is out. So I can get a copy:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 12:16:00 PM

I'm working on the book Alexis - will just be an e book of one's I've posted on soup and a few other funny poems:-) hugs Jan I am SO glad you are back here with us my friend:-):-) xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/4/2017 11:52:00 AM

I'm imagining this, Jan, and it's hilarious:) Jack is in for a surprise! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 12:15:00 PM

ha ha ha yes they shouldn't have gone up the hill n the first place lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2017 7:59:00 AM

LOL, a sure winner here x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 9:04:00 AM

If not sure what the sponsor is expecting so I played safe and didn't do bawdy lol:-) hugs jan xx

Darren White

Date: 6/4/2017 7:55:00 AM

That brings the strangest image in my mind, but not going to write that down here 0.o.... Great limerick, Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 9:03:00 AM

ha ha ha Darren it sure made me laugh writing it:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/4/2017 7:05:00 AM

Lol...great Lim Jan's

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 7:35:00 AM

Cheers Tim I ended up writing three and couldn't decide which one to choose but this is the one I'm putting in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/4/2017 6:19:00 AM

Very innovative thought, Jan, ha ha:)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 6:32:00 AM

If only it was that simple lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/4/2017 4:20:00 AM

That is an innovative way of delivering a baby dear Jan! You should copyright it! haha! Good luck my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 4:29:00 AM

Ha ha ha its probably not recommended by midwives lol:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/3/2017 9:10:00 PM

Tell Jill, that such a jump can kill. Then it won't be much of a thrill. You are producing good writes still.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/4/2017 3:35:00 AM

Thanks for the kind comment Robert - I have learned a lot since I wrote my first poem in Nov 2013 - I love the limerick form it appeals to my sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/3/2017 7:18:00 PM

Hi Jan , your mind is amazing and so funny :))))hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2017 7:24:00 PM

I do worry about my muse Niall lol just the image of a pregnant lady bungee jumping got my mind working overtime - of course they wouldn't be allowed which makes it even more funny!:-) hugs jan xx

Gail Debole

Date: 6/3/2017 7:13:00 PM

Hi Jan, Love this! Clever and funny.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2017 7:23:00 PM

Thanks Gail:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 6/3/2017 4:55:00 PM

Lol...Nicely done Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2017 4:57:00 PM

Thanks Joseph I wrote 3 poems for the contest but I will stick with this one now :-) hugs Jan xx

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/3/2017 4:09:00 PM

I love this.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/3/2017 4:12:00 PM

Aww thanks Dale I have written 3 limericks today each one I was putting in the contest but this is my final choice and I'm not changing my mind again - just a crazy idea that would never happen lol but that's poetic licence for you - I think mine is about to be revoked lol:-) hugs Jan xx