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An Unappreciated Housewife

He walks into the room each day at six As around their Dad all five children mix He smiles at them with glee Meantime he sneers at me So I get prepared to take all his licks “What have you been doing all day?” he asks No appreciation for all my tasks “Washed clothes and changed diapers Don’t need any gripers” This insensitive father wears two masks Each morning his breakfast is served on time Later, vodka collins are served with lime He never shops for food Says my cooking’s no good And when he bathes, the tub is filled with grime My Mom said, “Men just work from sun to sun, But a woman’s housework is never done” I found a new game plan A hearty, handsome man Together, my husband we could outrun May 25, 2012 *Entry for David’s 3 H contest

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Date: 7/7/2012 11:59:00 AM
I wonder how many of us have felt like this. As unpaid and weary creatures with no alternatives it sure is galling to not be appreciative when it costs nothing and is so easy to give. Couldn't help but win win! Luv, Lizabeth
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Date: 6/14/2012 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Hero's & Heroine's" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2012 5:32:00 AM
Great way to go..So the housewife ran away with the spooner...Congrats on your win..Enjoyed reading..Got a chuckle at the end..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2012 1:30:00 AM
Carolyn this tells a good story of how women are taken for granted, and lots do run away..well done..David
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Date: 6/13/2012 1:02:00 AM
Hope you made it , Carolyn, a well deserved win xx
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:59:00 PM
Loved the humor of this one, CArolyn. Congrats again!
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Date: 6/12/2012 8:42:00 PM
without women, where would men be?.. special cheers to you for this super win, carol:) huggs!
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Date: 6/12/2012 7:13:00 PM
Sure are alot of men like this! HUGS!!Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/4/2012 2:35:00 PM
I can just picture this drunk man chasing you and your new fling! What a gas! This is incredibly witty---nothing less from you!! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 6/3/2012 11:16:00 AM
Carolyn your ending is epic, I feel like saying good on her.. All the best for David's contest :) love Wilma
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Date: 6/3/2012 10:41:00 AM
Well yes a lot of people can be different like that Carolyn, but at least he bathed L O L; its true to life and all.." hope it goes well in the contest.
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Date: 6/2/2012 2:41:00 PM
ha! loved the ending! glad she got out of a bad relationship - it's crazy how some people can seem like 2 different people like that - you captured it perfectly.
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Date: 6/2/2012 4:38:00 AM
Wow i really like these especially the last one, so much here about reality, Carolyn, wonderful to read as always. harry
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:15:00 PM
Wonder where the romance went. Happens all too often and the damage done tends to linger. You made quite a statement Carolyn; all the best in the contest! P S I'm reading so many wonderful poems about you on this site dear lady, what a celebration! Luv, Lizabeth
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Date: 5/29/2012 7:10:00 PM
those last two lines made me burst out laughing. but the truth is maybe he's hurting like i am.
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Date: 5/29/2012 1:39:00 PM
lol...very clever wrap!!! i love it! best wishes in the contest..love ya, deb
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Date: 5/28/2012 5:41:00 PM
This common complaint should be at the top of the winners' list...Winning material for sure..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2012 7:12:00 PM
don't worry, even though he's mean. he'll hurt for you just like a son.
Date: 5/28/2012 10:43:00 AM
Down with husbands, except in my case. Bev still works and I do the house chores. Mind you, we have 9 cats, so my work is never done. Fortunately Bev doesn't complain much. She knows it will do no good. How about just - down with men in general, except old farts. Love, daver
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Date: 5/27/2012 6:43:00 PM
hahaha, you had a great ending to yours.Unlike mine which I hope to post later. I too did the housewife!!!
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Date: 5/26/2012 3:44:00 PM
Awesome write....cheers to a new game plan! Hugs
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Date: 5/26/2012 8:23:00 AM
yay!
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Date: 5/25/2012 6:54:00 PM
owee....good for her! lol..good work LNC. BG
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Date: 5/25/2012 2:29:00 PM
This is a truly magnificent and timeless write my dear friend! I really enjoyed your supreme and delightful poem! You used such great rhymes and awesome flow that I was mesmerized from it all! This write is so very true, I love the shocking nature of it! Keep it up Carolyn, Perfect Work!!
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