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All the Days We'Re Apart

You think you have killed my heart Ending everything like my thought Little do you know My hate does it show I feel better all the days we’re apart Russell Sivey Entrant into Sidney ~ LeeAnn's "A valentine Limerick~..." contest 1/16/2012

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2012 9:30:00 AM

right to the point Russell.. good luck in contest.. certainly filled with deep emotion luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2012 8:40:00 PM

a good "stick it to them in the END" limerick, my friend. And that's right, you have that bad arm. I guess I can now say that I too have a bad arm since the surgery didn't seem to completely make it feel "right" I bet you operate just great using only one arm. I remember before my surgery, I had to only use my one arm also but at least I was still able to tie my shoes with the bad arm. that would suck to have to learn how to tie things with one arm. YIKES. And putting on my necklace. FORGET IT

Don Johnson

Date: 1/17/2012 7:20:00 PM

good mantra mate, to often quote, search for another prize, forgive the past, toss that overcoat, catch another shiela, blythe?

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2012 10:39:00 PM

This is a fine example of a "serious" limerick. I'm sure Sidney will like this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2012 10:28:00 PM

Russell, another wonderful entry... I like to think i do well with out my x... maybe i do... who knows... maybe in the future we can be friends... good luck in the contest..p.d.