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Aha: a Poetic Noetic Instantiation In Three Acts

rushing inference, imminent insight suddenly its clear, a gut feeling swooning, reeling, cross-connected hemi-sphere syncopated, reverberated, totally aware open bi-ways, ahh blue-sky days, making up my mind synapses shiver, axons quiver, dendrites deliver 'lectrik-neurons fire suddenly in time aha! aha! oh gawd I see, I ran around 'n cried a fool I've been, all along its there, right in front of me with a grin 'n a nod 'n twinkly-looking 'round raised my arms 'n slapped my thighs 'n made a ruckus sound -- donned my hat 'n set it skewed upon my big bright head set off to town in an uplifted mood while whistling a sweet sound forgot what I had found # there's a hole in my head where the wounds of reason seep all words are dead inside my head what's left is dark 'n deep @ I'll always live and always die on the event horizon of my mind's eye where the flash of neuronal fires flower into sudden epiphany --
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOwgE18iuUQ <-- youtube anim of this piece

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Date: 2/25/2010 11:50:00 AM
my youtube rendition in animation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cOwgE18iuUQ
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Date: 4/21/2009 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful. Find a musician; you can sing it. All the best.
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:01:00 PM
I love the way you started out using sophistocated-scientific descriptions and brought it down to something easily forgotten. Then, the disambiguate and ambiguate writes brought it full circle with ...where the flash of neronal fires flower into sudden infinity...and there you go again with that complex thinking. ..an eternal circle of intelligence. I enjoyed it...
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:51:00 PM
"Open byways, ahh, blue sky days," Wow, Jerry. Excellent use of language, rhyme and imagery. I can almost hear this as a song!
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