Adonis

Routinely walk the mall, almost every morning Girlies crowd around by the dozens without warning Try to discourage them These yummy femmes No use, with this adonis-like body adorning

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/10/2017 10:38:00 AM

Oh my goodness. Well I guess you are a very busy fellow. A good and gracious good morning. Another ball out of the park.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/10/2017 2:11:00 PM

How are you going to celebrate and also "Hippo Birdies Two Ewes". Patricia

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/10/2017 11:35:00 AM

Oops... 82! Let's not rush it! (as if one year makes a difference at my age!!!) xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/10/2017 11:33:00 AM

It's the inside that counts anyway!!! I'll be 83 tomorrow... no flowers please.... money is okay though! Love to you from me!!! xxx

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/10/2017 11:19:00 AM

Bless your heart Mr. Bones I am no longer considered young even by me. But that is just my outsides.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/10/2017 10:47:00 AM

Gracious me!!! A phrase from the past!!! I'm having a ball this a.m. talkig with you young ladies!!! Love, Jacko xxx

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/10/2017 8:14:00 AM

Hey, Jackson...check out my Smelling Bad limerick...right up your alley my friend!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/10/2017 8:19:00 AM

Heading there right now!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/10/2017 7:42:00 AM

Ah, do you celebrate your body much my friend!? You have comical, and delightfully funny! Thank you for my morning laugh, at your expense nonetheless! "No use, with this adonis-like body adorning," Yeah, funny! Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/10/2017 7:58:00 AM

You have no idea what turmoil this adonis-like body causes! I am cursed!!! lol