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A Valentine Reprise

Hot passion ties hearts in tight knots Its heat roasts with thousands of watts Instead of the norm Drop this love and feel warm Consumed with lust for chocolàtes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2010 1:14:00 PM
Romantico..and sweet..Charma:)
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:51:00 AM
Yes, they do the trick as well. Except, they go to your fat cells. hahaha. Cute one. Hmmm, do you think they make diet licorce? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:46:00 AM
that is my kind of passion
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Date: 2/22/2010 6:28:00 AM
The humor here is great for I know the feeling of wanting that chocolate. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. The Haiku that you commented on was from a picture that Raul has in a contest. I just saw those rocks as pourous lava rock. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2010 3:03:00 PM
I love this one...it's so funny to me...Marty
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Date: 2/15/2010 2:03:00 PM
so great I love the way the readers mind flits from one posibility to the next! Thanks for reading my verses! (The man hit the woman he went to confession but he still went to jail. What she did was supposed to be up to your mind. ;) Light & Love
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