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A Little Bang

Mother Nature being supreme Who beckons her violent scream? Blind men lust for cash Binding her into ash The dust of kind Eden’s regime

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/10/2013 12:21:00 AM

Oh, this is very nice Duke ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2012 9:10:00 PM

Nice and biblical too!! Have you done one about the ice melting at the Arctic? It's sure scary stuff.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2010 3:42:00 PM

Kinda a sad thought in this Limerick. Last three lines sad truth. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for your comments. Sara

Jeralynn Clark

Date: 1/30/2010 7:37:00 AM

Sounds more like the irony of money! There cannot possibly be two of you?

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/24/2010 9:31:00 AM

A beautiful piece. Loved the truthfulness in it, the poem explains nature and then how man is in control but not to a certain point. A great read and have a paeceful Sunday. :)