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A Happily Ever After Marriage

There once was a poet extraordinaire, Who composed sweet poetry with great care. She wanted to find true love. So, she prayed to God above. He swiftly answered, “Sweetheart, you must forbear.” Forbearance was her lonely heart’s nightmare. She was a passionate woman with flare. Singing in a high octave. Counting petals of foxglove. She drank martinis alone in her lair. A brilliant mind with hope and a prayer, Resting her head on a lonely armchair. Praising spirits up above, She heard Ron’s voice, cute white dove. Alas, she found him…marriage…love so fair. (Linda-Marie, I used your profile picture for inspiration for this contest entry.) © March 31, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 4/12/2011 4:35:00 AM
Many congrats Dane on notching top place in Linda's Contest with this imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:06:00 PM
Lovely poem, well done on winning
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Date: 4/11/2011 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:17:00 AM
Many congrats on your win. This was a great entry, and a deserved winner. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dane Ann in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:43:00 AM
Wonderful winner, congrats. Harry
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:53:00 PM
This is one awesome dedication to this great poetess. Many congrats Dane Ann for this win.
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:49:00 PM
topping the charts with this sweety piece delights me, jane... CONGRATS from the heart! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:11:00 PM
congratulations on your win. Great job!!!
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:38:00 PM
Dane Ann, I am so pleased and happy to see your name in First Place with this awesome poem, and I am hoping and praying that you use the prize of a Premium Membership to come back to us in full membership. I miss you so much, you are a sweet and giving person, a lovely poet, and very much loved by many, many, your Dear Heart ~~
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Date: 4/10/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations, DAne Ann, on your big win here. I had not seen this one yet and I much enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:45:00 AM
Great limerick! /congrats on 1st place. Brilliant mind. lol. Gwendolen
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:11:00 AM
I don't have time to congratulate all the winners in this contest, but I am sooo happy to see you winning a premium membership, dear Dane. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:04:00 AM
Many congratulations : ) Jack
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:47:00 AM
Very sweet story in your winning entry, Dane Ann :) enjoyed reading this and super congrats on your first place-- super yay to you :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:23:00 AM
Happy to see you at no. 1. Great going and a lovely poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:22:00 AM
Brilliant write Dave,very cute last two lines.. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Love, Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:05:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations Dane anne on your 1st placment win!
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Date: 4/10/2011 9:46:00 AM
Excellent entry Dane, Congratulations on your honored first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:21:00 AM
Congrad's Danie on being numero uno! Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:12:00 AM
Such a well deserved win!!!! Great write!! always Michael
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Dane
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:52:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your first place in my Loveland Limerick contest with this stunning entry so perfect.. u have won a PM to P.S. for one year and I will submit your name for this prize.. it should activate in 24 hours.. CONGRATULATIONS! and thankxx for your constant support ....luv..
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:59:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Dane Ann and good luck.. judging right now luv..
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