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A Be-Witching Tale

smoke billowed from her boiling pot a spell for ages she had sought a special treat for kids to eat some pickled plums so teeth won't rot but children laughed at what she made to taste the swill they were afraid the witch was sad and got real mad their taunts one day would be repaid all hallows eve had come and went a day the kids would soon resent a curse was laid the children paid their treats turned into hard cement they moaned and wept and some did cry asking questions and pleading why they were upset with no regret wishing that witch would surely die now this is what I have been told the days have passed and I am old one girl returned her lesson learned and turned a heart to warm from cold **it is never to late to say you are sorry*

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Date: 11/1/2016 2:16:00 PM
Your limerick had me grinning as you set the stage in this poem. Then I saw the wisdom conveyed in the last line. It is a blessed to be able to turn "a heart to warm from cold." Awesome!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn
Date: 11/1/2016 10:20:00 AM
I love the moral of the story, Tim... did you stay away from your kids trick or treat candy or are they getting to old for trickortreat..... Hugs Eve
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:21:00 PM
no I didn't stay away...my 2 younger ones went.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 11/1/2016 9:12:00 AM
Great Halloween tale with a great string of limericks.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Armand
Date: 10/31/2016 8:04:00 PM
Happy Halloween!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:20:00 PM
ditto
Date: 10/31/2016 2:26:00 PM
love how this began boiling beautifully painted piece pal happy halloween
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Liam
Date: 10/31/2016 1:31:00 PM
- A great tale, Tim :) - Best wishes for a creepy Halloween :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thanks A-L
Date: 10/31/2016 8:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Tim. Now I'm in a Halloween state of mind.
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Date: 10/31/2016 8:28:00 AM
tis the day for treats and tricks//tiddlywinks and pickup sticks//fine traditions//no conditions//apologies and less conflicts. Good spook day morn to you too, Mr. Tim! Pickled plums turning into concrete? Wow, no wonder witches get a bad rap;-) Nice string 'O lim'riks amigo!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:15:00 PM
Thanks J...I need to go in chocolate detox
Date: 10/31/2016 3:07:00 AM
Great, greater, greatest, a 7 for each Limerick and a huge seven for the moral of the story my friend, Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 10/30/2016 6:31:00 PM
No feathers in this poem! Great write!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:13:00 PM
Except in the chocolate covered chicken...lol
Date: 10/30/2016 5:48:00 PM
very cute final moral to this one, Tim. Good post for this season!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:12:00 PM
Thanks Andrea we had great weather for it this year.
Date: 10/30/2016 5:38:00 PM
Tim, these are great limericks with a great message, well done~
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Constance
Date: 10/30/2016 5:22:00 PM
well done, tim! i enjoyed ...
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thanks ilene
Date: 10/30/2016 3:44:00 PM
A fun one to warm even the coldest heart.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank you Richard
Date: 10/30/2016 2:53:00 PM
:) Good one, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/1/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Eileen
Date: 10/30/2016 2:33:00 PM
Fantastic..If this is for a limerick contest..I see a winner.I love the tale Timothy...Very wise lesson indeed..A fave.: )
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Charmu. It's not for a contest. Just in the Halloween spirit...boo :)
Date: 10/30/2016 1:52:00 PM
Great tale Tim hope you have a great Halloween:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2016 2:47:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Can't wait for all the costumes
Date: 10/30/2016 11:45:00 AM
good Halloween tale tim
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2016 2:46:00 PM
Thanks Stephen

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